Share the learning journey of 23 amazing Year 4 children at Fieldhead Carr Primary School, Leeds.
our talk homework sounds quite hardbut im sure i'll manage
All you need to do is describe what you can see. Use your imagination and remember to create images for the reader.
I really like the image of the town peeking up from underneath the clouds. It is an incredibly atmospheric picture that leaves a lot to the imagination. I couldn't help but wonder about the type of people that live there! What time period is it set in? Are their any magical animals that inhabit the streets? If you have any answers to these questions, please do let me know.Night Zookeeper
Your blog post is good and cool pictues. Well done!From Bryony from Shelley First School
thanc you from ela
I loved writing my story it was great by Abbie
Sam, Shelley First School That looked really cool! I wish our class could've done that.
WOW!! The pictures are great!from Amelia at Shelley First School
All of the pictures are good how do you do that. From Connor tungate from Shelley First School
this is my opening for setting one in a land far away where not mant people lived there was a dragon who spent his days with a house on the tip of his tail his tail balanced on a sea shell one day the dragon got fed up of just sitting there he decided to explore but what he did not remember was that the house was on his tail so when he got up the house tipped and crashed into the sea .........to be continued ..................
WOW! elle yor story is gr8 i wish i could do a story like that.by bailey
Thank you Bailey my big write is better though but this one is just as good
pic 1one srormy night as the wind called like howling dogs john walked and walked and walked until he reached a strange world in the middel of know where heheard a voice help something is breaking our bridge that hold's a small vilage up.
pic 4 we love the picture were the clouds are covering the village.
in a far awey village thear was aking a qwen the qwen was sik the gards went out to find a flawer to heyul the qwen wen they got back to the chasel they put the flouwe in a boull for the qwen to jrenk to heyul a hellthy babey was bone to selbreyt the bouth they lit a lantn one hingt a girl tancen the babey and hinda the babey in a big big towerto be contion from alyssa